For this post, I am to critique two fellow student blogs. The first blog I chose to read was Nohelys. Her blog's name is nellsf395 on wordpress and I read it on November 25, 2013. I liked Nohelys blog, it is simple and straight to the point in terms of following the criteria of the assignments. In her earlier entries, it seems like she put more thought into what she wanted to convey out there to the blog world, then on her later entries, she did minimal writing. Since I am more of a visual person, I would have loved to see more personal touches such as videos or pictures. Nohelys should also cite her sources and use links to the articles used in her research.
The second blog I read on November 25, 2013 was Natalia's on nykop395blog on wordpress. I am disappointed to see that she didn't follow the Professor's instructions as to the set up of our blog's. Natalia's earlier 10 assignments were crammed into 2 separate posts and were not labeled as instructed, which made it hard for me to understand what she was writing about. In her later entries, she did separate her entries as individual posts and though they lacked visuals such as videos and pictures, she managed to get her point across to the reader. I would also recommend to Natalia to cite her sources and use proper citations and give links to her articles.
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